Linda asks…OPINONS/HELP WITH MY SHORT, DESCRIPTIVE STORY??Please correct me, and improve my writing to make it more exciting. Thank you. :D
Light, fluffy cotton balls fell from the sky. A blanket of snow had wrapped the city. My foot sank into the snow with every step. Little flakes fell like feathers on my eyelashes, making them sparkle. I walked towards the wooden cottage. Thick snow piled on top of the ancient house, threatening to crush it to death. Frost seeped on the cracked windows. A
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